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It Isn't Fair by ~greydaze234:icongreydaze234:

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I am hoping you will read this,
So our friendship isn’t gone.
I’m hoping you will not read it,
So that I might move on.

I know this feeling isn’t fair
For either you or me.
It’s so diff’rent from how I am
A part you wouldn’t see.

I don’t think you realize
How much of me you hurt.
You continue to forget me.
Leave me with no comfort.

You say that you love me
And we are friends forever.
But why do you turn around,
Push me farther, faster?

You plan day after day
And you again leave me behind.
Your actions again shout;
Your voice keeps me blind.

I don’t know whether you mean it
Or if this is me paranoid.
I hope you make your choice.
Because I hate being toyed.

One more reason for my worry
That friendship soon might end:
I cannot admit it face-to-face.
I wrote this prose instead.
©2007-2009 ~greydaze234
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Submitted: September 11, 2007
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This actually started to form in my mind in the beginning of July, meant for one person. It grew in time to be applied to several people.
Just remember: I'm emo and angsty when I write so that I'm not in real life.
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*BIJOU2626:iconBIJOU2626: Sep 11, 2007, 10:25:50 PM
Oh this is so nice. I love the way you wrote this. Fav! :)

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~sapphire159:iconsapphire159: Sep 11, 2007, 10:42:20 PM
I love poems that end stating that you are writing it.

Hopefully this isn't me?

Pretty poem.

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Death is a promise and your life is a fucking lie.
~iblvinathgcldlv:iconiblvinathgcldlv: Sep 11, 2007, 10:58:01 PM
i have a feeling of at least one or two people who could match this

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~greydaze234:icongreydaze234: Sep 12, 2007, 6:22:45 PM
Thank you! This is the first thing I've written in a while, so the fav is appreciated that much more.

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Well I turn off the light,
Say goodbye to another night.
I'm gonna rest my weary head,
Put my bones away in bed.
I'm gonna get on my knees and pray to the Lord
To give me just one more day.
Oh Lord, hear my plea,
This music means so much to me.
~greydaze234:icongreydaze234: Sep 12, 2007, 6:27:59 PM
Thank you!

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Well I turn off the light,
Say goodbye to another night.
I'm gonna rest my weary head,
Put my bones away in bed.
I'm gonna get on my knees and pray to the Lord
To give me just one more day.
Oh Lord, hear my plea,
This music means so much to me.
~greydaze234:icongreydaze234: Sep 12, 2007, 6:29:19 PM
I can think of a dozen or so that apply in the slightest to this. But at least it's off the chest.

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Well I turn off the light,
Say goodbye to another night.
I'm gonna rest my weary head,
Put my bones away in bed.
I'm gonna get on my knees and pray to the Lord
To give me just one more day.
Oh Lord, hear my plea,
This music means so much to me.
~iblvinathgcldlv:iconiblvinathgcldlv: Sep 12, 2007, 6:37:02 PM
indeed, i know how it is

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*BIJOU2626:iconBIJOU2626: Sep 12, 2007, 8:12:22 PM
;)

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<<REMIND ME OF TOMORROW>>
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~Sagitari-Seiza-1213:iconSagitari-Seiza-1213: Sep 14, 2007, 5:03:44 AM
Quite a lot of feeling put into those words there. Very nice word choice too! ^^
Cheers! ^_0

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~Myri Freezefire -- "Seeing isn't always believing. Sometimes it's the other way around." :floating:
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